Water - Prompt from The Red Dress Club

This again is a departure from my regularly scheduled programming but I really liked this prompt from
The Red Dress Club and I like to pretend I'm deep sometimes. Hope you enjoy!
The exact prompt was to write something around this concept:
"Water gives life. Water takes it away."
Here's my take on it. 


Silence.
That is what I remember the most about being there, surrounded by the liquid darkness that had swallowed me. 
The noise that was so deafening just moments ago was perfectly, blissfully silent now. 
I opened my eyes and could see almost as little as I could hear. 
I must be deeper than I thought to see so little. 

Good. 
That is where I wanted to be. 
It was cold, freezing cold, but I was glad. 
It was the most alive I had felt in longer than I could remember. 

Weightless. 
Suspended somewhere between the surface and the bottom, but really nowhere. 
Nothing pushing down on me or pulling me in a direction I didn't want to go.
I was simply where I was. 
I didn't want to surface again. I didn't want the noise and the heat and the blinding light to attack me again. 

So I stayed




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